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| 05/02/2007 01:29:34 PM |
On a cloudy day, the sun is hiding, but the flowers are shiningby superdaveComment by Artifacts: Positives:
Perspective and lighting are the strengths of this composition. Generally decent technicals and good composition.
Technicals:
Sharpness and lighting are generally good, especially in the clouds. It is very easy to allow overexposed areas in clouds... you didn't. Lighting on the tulips brought out detail that is the main attraction of the composition. The drama of the background clouds supports the image very well. The application of the rule of thirds adds to the visual interest of the image, especially since there is cloud balance of the right side.
The shadows generated by lighting on the tulips creates some distracting shadows. White might not be the best tulip color for this composition.
The Challenge:
Voters look for technical quality and "wow" factor in free study challenges. Your image has both which is why it scored above this challenge's average and the overall DPC average.
If looking for a reason why the image did not top 6 look no further than the slightly harsh shadows on the tulips and their white color.
Suggestions:
Reduce the intensity of shadows on the tulips. There are many ways you could chose to do that. If you have a different colored tulips try a re-shoot to see how it will stand out against the clouds. (Yes, I realize clouds will be different in a re-shoot. LOL!!!) |
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| 05/02/2007 01:24:12 PM |
On a cloudy day, the sun is hiding, but the flowers are shiningby superdaveComment by Artifacts: Positives:
Perspective and lighting are the strengths of this composition. Generally decent technicals and good composition.
Technicals:
Sharpness and lighting are generally good, especially in the clouds. It is very easy to allow overexposed areas in clouds... you didn't. Lighting on the tulips brought out detail that is the main attraction of the composition. The drama of the background clouds supports the image very well. The application of the rule of thirds adds to the visual interest of the image, especially since there is cloud balance of the right side.
The shadows generated by lighting on the tulips creates some distracting shadows. White might not be the best tulip color for this composition.
The Challenge:
Voters look for technical quality and "wow" factor in free study challenges. Your image has both which is why it scored above this challenge's average and the overall DPC average.
If looking for a reason why the image did not top 6 look no further than the slightly harsh shadows on the tulips and their white color.
Suggestions:
Reduce the intensity of shadows on the tulips. There are many ways you could chose to do that. If you have a different colored tulips try a re-shoot to see how it will stand out against the clouds. (Yes, I realize clouds will be different in a re-shoot. LOL!!!)
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| 04/17/2007 09:00:49 AM |
dpccar.jpgby superdaveComment by Jutilda: YES!!!!! Excellent post editing. I like the duplicity of the circles - the wheel ties it all in. This is COOL. Love that old Cadillac. |
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