Ropes and Spars and Negative Space
by chalice

Comment by tosk:
I like the sharpness of the picture. The ropes don't seem featured prominently here - there are a lot of them but they're small and overshadowed by the mast.

Ropes and Spars and Negative Space
by chalice

Comment by JackieK:
Intresting composition, good job!

Escaping from the Can
by chalice

Comment by Kelli:
Trading post...
I didn't vote in this challenge, but would have given you extra points for the creativity and originality! The technical aspects aren't that great. It looks a little blurry or oof. Very noisy as well.

Ropes and Spars and Negative Space
by chalice

Comment by rookiegeezer:
Too busy.

Ropes and Spars and Negative Space
by chalice

Comment by JamesKW:
Good shot. Lots of negative space though (Kidding) :) Good luck

Escaping from the Can
by chalice

Comment by Melethia:
LOL! Really like the idea.. quite cute! The staging is good but the technicals are weak - looks a bit overexposed and grainy to me and probably could have used a bit more dramatic lighting. Still, I gotta admire the time and patience it must have taken to put peas on a paperclip.

Escaping from the Can
by chalice

Comment by timfythetoo:
I think you have a good idea here, but the execution and technical aspects are lacking. It almost looks like an ad that was clipped and scanned. The colors and lighting seem odd and the focus is off, almost like it was cropped too tight from a much larger picture. And the head pea seems way too small ;). Rough shot overall - but we know you can do way better.

Magic on the High Seas: A Vessel Named "Island Magic"
by chalice

Comment by levyj413:
I don't see how this photo conveys mystery or magic. How would I know that's the ship's name? Aside from that, it's a decent image, although it would benefit from better focus and contrast. 3.

Ropes and Spars and Negative Space
by chalice

Comment by NovaTiger:
What ship is this?

Ropes and Spars and Negative Space
by chalice

Comment by Cheerz:
Oh no.. You could have gotten a great shot of ropes on that ship. This is "all over the place". No common theme and its messy.

Focus on a part of the rope or compose your shot to show the rope in "action".

The rope element is lost in this photo.

Sory mate. You're free to PM me if you need any clarification.

Cheers
eric