Danish Poultry League
by chesire

Comment by ericwoo:
Hey there from the Critique Club

Camera Work/Technical: The first think that grabs the voters eye and makes them take notice is sharp focus. You look a little on the soft side here, and I am pretty sure that this was one aspect that pulled your score down.

Lighting: I like the mood you created with your lighting. Somehow, it fits very nicely with the working subject you have included.

Composition/Content: I like your initial composition, but the lettering needs some work. I think that I would have gone with a bolder font, and I absolutely would have left off that stroking of the letters.

My Opinion: You started with a neat idea and a great 'band' name. This one just needed a bit better execution in a few areas.

Thank you for the opportunity to provide a critique on your entry,
Eric

Just A Little Blue
by chesire

Comment by photokariangel:
cute, but the face seems a little TOO white on some spots, makes it look spotchy white, does that make sense?

Go Fish!
by chesire

Comment by sherpet:
What a sweet little princess, and I love the soft sepia tones of this one.....

Go Fish!
by chesire

Comment by Alicia:
Gotta love it - good capture and the selective desat is awesome.

Go Fish!
by chesire

Comment by CapeSail:
Very cute, Nice lighting and processing. What a great look on her face.

Pout
by chesire

Comment by JerseyGenie:
Love those almond eyes she's so disappointed. LOL! Be sure to keep this one to show her first boyfriend ... this is pure gold.

Danish Poultry League
by chesire

Comment by posthumous:
The first and some say the best Danish ska band, the Poultry League was thought to have sold out in this, their major label debut. By singing in English, they were considered merely a novelty act by Americans. The title song turned into a very popular dance at Frat parties. Dancers would take turns in the center of crazed flappers, and would have to kiss the fifth chicken they counted.

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Pout
by chesire

Comment by Art Roflmao:
She no looka too happy. A cutie though! Great lighting/exposure.

Danish Poultry League
by chesire

Comment by smardaz:
love the choice of words but i think the picture to go along with it could have been hilarious 6

Kissing Petals
by chesire

Comment by smardaz:
really like the softness of this shot..well done and hope you didnt let her eat it