convergence
by maguero

Comment by KarenNfld:
Excellent colour and detail, really nice.

convergence
by maguero

Comment by Luci11e:
for me this isn't leading lines but it is a nice image

convergence
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Comment by Neat:
Very clever thinking, to take this shot.

Rolling no more!!
by maguero

Comment by snaffles:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

Initial impression: I love subjects like this, rusted/broken wagon wheels slowly rotting into the ground. I gave a 6 during voting based on this sentiment.

Technical: 1/250 seems awfully fast to be shooting a stationary subject. Even handheld, you should be good to shoot handheld at 1/60. With a tripod, you could have closed down the aperture quite a bit and then slowed the shutter down for more dof and detail. Composition OK, more could have been done to make the wheel the dominant element.

Artistic: Quite a lot of stuff over on the right where not much is happening, feel that it is competing with the wheel for attention. I would suggest a closer crop, perhaps a more frontal view of the wheel.

Overall: A very promising shot. If you can, go back and re-shoot from different angles. See what you come up with.

Feel free to PM me with any questions,

Susan

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by maguero

Comment by cowboy221977:
Could use some more contrast...

Lunar progression
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Comment by herfotoman:
The irregular distances caught my eye, still don't know if I like it or not.

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Comment by kiwinick:
G9d Idea excellent prop but wheel merges into background tones. move the wheel to another location is my answer.Fill flash? if so well done
Again Bloody awful background

Lunar progression
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Comment by Dennisheckman:
Great image, hope it doesn't get DQ'd. I thought about something like this as well, but changed my mind.

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Comment by NapCat:
Great textures and subject for this challenge

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by maguero

Comment by Art Roflmao:
A little vinegar and WD40... :)