The Flag of Loversby
PedxerComment by BMacD: Hi! Here’s a comment from the Critique Club.
First Impression:
Interesting lines, eyes drawn to the bottom and then back to the door knob. Question, how does this fit with romanceâ€Â¦.aw yaâ€Â¦.now I get itâ€Â¦.
Composition:
Interesting angle but you suffer some perspective distortion. I like the brass colour as a contrast.
Subject:
Don’t know how many people would get this. Does not fall within the “typical” romance theme. I’m sure those who did get it smiled.
Technical:
With no comments to go by, I can’t tell what you did or what you were trying to do. Door & frame are splotchy. Can’t tell if it’s the door or your lens.
Find the focus a little soft. Some USM may have helped. (Hand held @ 1/13?)
Also find the grey scale very narrow. Don’t know what post processing you have available, but a little more contrast would also help.
Summary:
Nice perspective, and cropping. A “clever subject” may have cost you “traditional votes”
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