Suz in the Sun
by IndigoButterfly

Comment by heathen:
I like the idea of over-exposing here, yet you may have gone a stop too far...also, without the ability to tweak contrast this doesn't quite work...good shadows and composition

Peonies
by IndigoButterfly

Comment by BethieB:
IMO a little too bright, but points for creativity!!

Peonies
by IndigoButterfly

Comment by alien2thisworld:
Great idea for the shot. I am not sure I like the blown out highlights covering most of the left side of the shot though. I think the composition is good, and the flowers chosen are quite intersting. The little bit of green in the top right is a little distracting, and I think the shot would be improved a little if it weren't there.

Peonies
by IndigoButterfly

Comment by ursula:
Very nice idea, I like it. I think the light is a bit harsh, I'm not sure, but I think the same picture with softer light would work better. I also think that for the image to be picture perfect it might be good to clone out the words inside the shoe, and maybe use something other than a towel like material for background. I do like the pink flowers on greyish shoes though.

Suz in the Sun
by IndigoButterfly

Comment by Azrifel:
This has potential. Next time try to diffuse the sunlight to avoid the highlight/blownout parts. Fill in the shadows that are that way created with some reflected light or diffused flash. Also don't use a carpet as a background, put more distance between subject and background.

Suz in the Sun
by IndigoButterfly

Comment by freakin_hilarious:
Good idea and a good portrait in general, but the light is a bit too harsh IMO.

Suz in the Sun
by IndigoButterfly

Comment by ralfw:
Great positioning of the model, I like it, but the direct sun needs to be blocked in a shot like this. It's simply too harsh. Suggestion - try the same shot, but keep the model completely in the shade.

Suz in the Sun
by IndigoButterfly

Comment by Spitfyr:
Too washed out.

Laced
by IndigoButterfly

Comment by cp5140:
Great shot!

Laced
by IndigoButterfly

Comment by wavelength:
this is a pretty sweet shot, as your score shows ;) only improvement I can say is to move the left hands heel out of the way to expose the rest of the palm.

sorry I took so long to get back on 1 for 1's. may bad :)