Wright's Corner Cemetery est.1864
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Comment by tomz:
Love the sky!

Colleen
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Comment by Younger:
Pretty shirt - takes away from the girl

Freshly Dipped
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Comment by beam:
Very interesting image.

Colleen
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Comment by Amason:
My comment might seem to be a little strange but I think this model needs to have more simplicity in her clothes, she has very clean face with long straight hair, a green simple dress or maybe red would have made this photo much better, also just a regular umbrella, maybe red or white with white background. I think the pictures in the umbrella and the shirt don't match with the whole, at least not the shirt, but the model is very nice and the lighting is good.

Message edited by author 2006-04-26 13:37:00.

Colleen
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Comment by ronnyt:
Really nice. It's busy but the busy works really well here. The super red lips are a nice touch. The hand looks a little awkward but not immediatly noticeable. Good luck!

Colleen
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Comment by Katmystiry:
There is too much going on with the parasol and the shirt, it distracts from the gal.

Colleen
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Comment by bandit:
Very hot model. Well posed and good composition. 10

Colleen
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Comment by ladyhawk22:
Good lighting on the model and great colors in the clothes and umbrella. I'm not incredibly fond of the black background in the lower left corner, but everything else looks nice!

Colleen
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Comment by IceRock:
Good work but bit stiff posing .. ice

Colleen
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Comment by tngrndream:
i am thinking i would like her to be looking at the camera, rather than off the camera. this is a stunning effect, and i would think it to be better ifn she is looking this way. just my opinion though