Colleen
by danderson107

Comment by Prime_Time:
For me the over all image is too busy, the quality of light looks good. As I look around in your image I see things I would change like the shirt maybe a plain color, something more to be a more contrasty to your umbrela, like maybe a stripped shirt. Just to give it some more lines, with the great lines in your umbrela. These are just my thoughts hope you do well. She is very pretty girl. Have a grat day.

Colleen
by danderson107

Comment by FotoMunki:
This is an intersting picture. Colleen looks like a very lovely woman, but unfortunatley she is getting lost in the busyness of the shirt and umbrella. Her alabaster skin, light hair and bright lipstick would have done better against a darker, solid background. Good lighting and composition though!

Wright's Corner Cemetery est.1864
by danderson107

Comment by Zigomar:
NIce colours, especially the sky.

Colleen
by danderson107

Comment by Azrifel:
I like the flow of the compostion and the brightness of this.
The elbow part of the arm looks so hard defined against that black background; I wonder if a white / brighter one would have worked better to get a better transition from the bright skin to the background.

Wright's Corner Cemetery est.1864
by danderson107

Comment by Ken:
Nice processing.

Wright's Corner Cemetery est.1864
by danderson107

Comment by nards656:
I think this will do well, but the grass in front is distracting. 9

Colleen
by danderson107

Comment by yanko:
This fills the frame really well. Very nice. There seems to be a few hot spots at the top there but nothing too distracting.

Colleen
by danderson107

Comment by YerPalAl:
spot on!

Wright's Corner Cemetery est.1864
by danderson107

Comment by espy2:
Beautful fones and contrast. Love it. It's a 10 for me.

Wright's Corner Cemetery est.1864
by danderson107

Comment by kiwiness:
I like the atmosphere in this image. Very eerie!