Ray
by bullethead

Comment by leon00:
Ok. Nice one but the floor is dirty :) Good idea

Ray
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Comment by amster:
Is this somebody flattened by a steam roller and just has his head sticking up? Oh, no! Not my buddy Ray! Intriguing. 7

Ray
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Comment by lkn4truth:
This shot was boring for me (sorry). A lot of needles empty space and the flashlight on the floor (or whatever it is) doesn't seem too original or creative. I'm sorry to have to give it a 4

Ray
by bullethead

Comment by tannah:
Too much of the shade on the top, anyway; a good idea.

Ray
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Comment by katswig:
Boring.

Ray
by bullethead

Comment by seancgn68:
Not sure what I am looking at. What is the subject?

Golden treasure inside is hid
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Comment by OneSweetSin:
Greetings from the Critique Club

Nice composition. Good idea definately a delicate situation for that egg.

I like the slow shutter speed here it works for the message you are trying to convey.

What I really don't like is the glare on the egg, it's distracting and takes away from an otherwise flawless egg. The reflection in your stoneware is also distracting but as for the mark you mention in your background I didn't notice til after I read your comment.

I think you may have done better though with a white egg would have made your composition a lot stronger.

Best wishes
Anna

Golden treasure inside is hid
by bullethead

Comment by FotoMunki:
Would have made for an interesting "Shutter Speed" challenge entry as well. Good lighting and textures.

Proper beer
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Comment by BrennanOB:
cropping is too tight, why cut off the neck of the bottle and the bottom of the glass when you already have so much white space? Good colors and shadows.

Proper beer
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Comment by sestevens:
I think you have a choice here in composition...a) using more negative space, therefore giving more a sense of place to the assorted objects...or b) bringing the obects closer together and doing a major crop in the lens. Right now, it seems too much halfway between, so there's nothing really holding it together.