Footstep
by bergwalters

Comment by rick13601:
You might want to put more yellow in this shot.

Footstep
by bergwalters

Comment by alpharich:
sorry not very yellow

Black round thing
by bergwalters

Comment by ckdake:
I'd have cropped off a little more of the top I think.

Black round thing
by bergwalters

Comment by anindya:
looks like a wide angle view of a tyre, rather than macro work.

Black round thing
by bergwalters

Comment by Hawkeye:
A nice close-up photo but not abstract IMO.

Black round thing
by bergwalters

Comment by Elaine:
I find the water more interesting than the tire (and also more abstract).

...and time stood still!
by bergwalters

Comment by kteach:
Great motion in the water here, very relaxing to look at. The top half of the shot feels too empty for me though.

Big brother, tell me your secret.
by bergwalters

Comment by loseme:
*Critique Club*

"Big brother, tell me your secret." is very nice shot. I think a lot of the voters, including myself were expecting really odd subjects. Your idea is very nice and their is some contradiction between the two but they don't really seem odd. The subject not seeming truly odd I think is what really hurt the score.

The image itself is very pleasing. I really like the time of day, just when the sun is going down or coming up. This time really allows for nice shot, highlighting the lights without being too dark. I really the positioning in the shot, especially on the left hand side the layer of the boats is just great. I also like the calm colors, and how soothing the image feels. Good work.

...and time stood still!
by bergwalters

Comment by shamrock:
It's interesting. Not sure i like all the negative space with the B&W treatment. Border catches my eye in a bad way. I do like the creaminess of the water motion.

...and time stood still!
by bergwalters

Comment by xianart:
very nice. the shiny rocks and the smooth water. the blown out sky makes it all the more surreal - a studio shot with a tide??? ;)