Wrong Wayby
StormCatComment by kari1: ::: Critique Club :::
Hi, I am Kari and from the critique club.
I am to critique your photo "wrong way" as requested.
First Impression - the most important one:
Interesting picture, a little stark and a bit small.
Composition:
The composition is ok. I probably would have worked the broken down car into thirds a little more to make it a bit more of the focus of the picture.
Subject:
Great choice of subject matter. Always and so often happens and all you think is sh!!t .. how did they manage that.
Technical (Colour and light):
The picture appears a little blurry but this may be the depth of field. Also a number of the commentors have mentioned that they like the black and white aspect, but how does it look in colour. I would also work on the resizing options as 640 longest side is going to get a bit more attention (especially in thumbnail) than something smaller.
To grow its vote?:
Solid entry... top 50%. As you practice more with your camera and software you will find more ways to entice people into your picture, and ensuring they have to give it more thought.
Summary:
Well done, keep it up.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari