Don't Feed the Gatorsby
ericwooComment by KiwiShotz: ::: Critique Club :::
Hi from the critique club, this is going to be fun, I hate critters, especially slimy green ones that want to eat me.
First Impressions:
It's not the sort of image you "like" very much is it. I didn't get wowed by it, but neither did I have a passive reaction. The thing looks seriously creepy and threatening and that engaged me - always a good thing in a competition photograph.
Subject:
This is a great choice of subject because it is guaranteed to get a reaction from the viewer. Even better that it's partially hidden and therefore more menacing. Even better, it's green - right on Challenge :)
Composition:
The bottom left to top right position of the 'gator has created a leading line whilst the eye is almost on thirds. The whole effect is a pretty good balance without being spectacularly captivating. You really did the very best with the material available.
Technical (Colour, Lighting and focus):
I'm undecided about the depth of field. At some point I like it then 5 minutes later I wonder how much more impact it would have had with a long DOF with all the algae sharp. I've decided that I'm not prepared to release a statement at this time ... lol. You nailed the challenge, it's green. Perhaps not brilliant green, but there's really no doubt.
I see you were running ISO200, was that intentional? Fortunately with this subject grain would never be an issue. You obviously had plenty of light at 1/5000th and f2.8. I bet you played with the DOF, did the others look pretty ho hum?
Growing the Vote:
It is perhaps a little golden if you're really scrapping to get every last point in voting but it in no way doesn't meet the Green challenge. Its just that voting is hard and people have to look for differences that can cost a point.
Summary:
It's a cool shot. It got noticed. It scored above average (of 5.5) but I'm really surprised about the 13 3's - no way does it deserve that so I really don't understand it. I wish I did.
Brett