Empty pool autumn bluesby
jjbeguinComment by jimmsp: Critique Club Critique
(1) COMPOSITION (CONTENT) - At first appearance, seems very busy. My eye tends to wander around quite a bit. I seem to be looking for your subject. Itâs not until later that I realize the whole canvas is your subject, at least to me. I donât like the two horizontal lines across the picture, though they are mostly covered; a minor distraction.
(2) BACKGROUND â See comment above. Iâm not sure what is the background is, and what the main subject is. Itâs hard for me to call the leaves the background
(3) CAMERA WORK ,TECHNICAL â Very good for what you intended. Focus is dead on.
(4) DIGITAL PROCESSING ,TECHNICAL â At first glance, it appears you over saturated the blues. The material under the leaves is too blue for my tastes (I know the challenge is âblueâ). But you probably needed to do that to get the blue in the leaves.
(5) MY OPINION ON THE PHOTO â Overall, pretty good, an âartsyâ photo, tending to the abstract. I like it. I think it could have been a much better abstract if you had played with the focus some, shooting the leaves well out of focus. Then the over saturated blues would have worked better. It may not have scored better, as the majority of voters here donât appreciate abstract photos, but I think you may have been happier with it.
Jim msp