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Comment by gbautista87:
I see some stair stepping in the slanted bars. Maybe you cropped the picture too much. Try setting your camera to a higher resolution.

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Comment by tristalisk:
image is crooked. I feel this would have looked better if the top of the front triangle had not been cut of. I also feel that if this had been shot from a bit higher up looking through the triangle this would have alowed you to crop out all of the destracting extras such as the pink pole. I feel you were on to a good start but that you rushed this one before you found somthing that you were truely happy with. It apears to be the begining of an intetresting shot .. yet it also looks unfinished.

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Comment by saracat:
Suject is tilted - can't tell if it's intentional or not, but I don't particularly like it. You've also got some rough edges where the red contrasts against the blue (I know there's a term for it, but I can't think of it). I like the colors and perspective, though, and I think that with a couple of tweaks this could be a really good photo.

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Comment by janbruder:
mmh... the triangles are slightly crooked, you could have cropped them straighter. Also watch for image noise. Try to make foreground items blend into the composition -- i.e. leave them out or don't crop them into pieces (like the pink tubing on the right)

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Comment by AlexMonty:
This shot is a little too busy :( but nice idea for the triangle challenge. I like the receding triangles except for future challenges you might want to set apart your subject a bit more. It's also a little blurry. Good luck on this challenge and for future challenges too. Farewell-

Alex

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Comment by mpemberton:
Great shot! Just four things: focus, very jagged on the edges of the triangles, to bright in the white areas and a lot of noise in the blue area. 6

Lizard night out Bugs are Free
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Comment by Kathy:
The lighting is way to bright, making the lizard almost invisible.

Lizard night out Bugs are Free
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Comment by RonBeam:
Did you notice this is out of focus? You probably rushed the shot so the subject would not get away. But in rushing, you neglected a prime rule, make sure focus is where you want it.

Lizard night out Bugs are Free
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Comment by wester:
really, photographs like these need to be perfectly sharp, or alternatively have the kind of motion fuzzyness that actually suggests motion. this is just boring.

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Comment by MichaelC:
like the angle & lighting, very dramatic, but focus is way too soft