Golf with a View
by Steveinnz

Comment by mk:
A nice shot, although a bit neon. My main issue is with the divisions. This doesn't really strike me as a triptych, but seems more like a photo with lines drawn through it and is especially difficult in the portion where there are whitecaps. Perhaps a thin black border would have helped. In addition, the top and bottom sections do not line up properly on the sides.

Golf with a View
by Steveinnz

Comment by riolobo:
How does the division of your picture into three frames enhance the photo? How does this "tell...a story or illustrates a concept or object" better than the original image?

Golf with a View
by Steveinnz

Comment by Bud:
Very nicely compsed and set up for a triptych.

Golf with a View
by Steveinnz

Comment by DeniseBernadette:
Pretty scene. Looks a bit oversaturated.

Golf with a View
by Steveinnz

Comment by nerdynotdirty:
wow, pretty! but i dont much care for where you divided the photos up. good shot nonetheless. 8

Golf with a View
by Steveinnz

Comment by echoman:
beautiful shot but doesn't feel right chopped up.

Golf with a View
by Steveinnz

Comment by scrum8:
Seems a little washed out, or maybe too much yellow. I wonder if a lens filter would have enhanced it.

Golf with a View
by Steveinnz

Comment by macrothing:
3 - Nice colors. Criticism; a bit 'over bright'. The arrangement and frame placement doesn't work in my opinion. The color and size also do not 'enhance'. The cropping / framing / padding is not symmetrical.

Golf with a View
by Steveinnz

Comment by stare_at_the_sun:
This would of been better with a black border...or even a green one that matches the green green.

Golf with a View
by Steveinnz

Comment by Germaine:
Beautiful picture and original division of image. I'm not sure that I like the white frame, though. It interferes with the waves. Black might have worked better.