Church Doorsby
inspzilComment by Azrifel: ~~~~Critique Club Comment~~~~
Composition (content)
Interesting conversion, combined with the subject it looks like Gothic art. What most struck me in this image was the strange shadow of the handrails, intensified by the glowing edges. It looked strange, out of place.
I really like the effect of what you did and the early morning exposure has made sure that all the details on the arches are clear and not covered in a deep shadow.
I have a small list of suggestion though:
* Level the horizon
* Try to seek a more balanced crop between left and right. The left pillar has space at the left, while the right pillar has been cut trough. A level horizon could also produce a cleaner cut on top, so that the curly decorated stones provide a better top framing (or leave them out).
* Try to spot edit the shadows of the handrails away (it was allowed for this challenge). On the stairs it isn't a problem, but on the door and pillar I think it to be a bit distracting
Including some of the street in front was a good thing.
Camera Work (Technical)
Exposure seems to be good, can't say anything about the other camera stuff. :)
Digital Processing (technical)
See composition.
Was this the max jpeg quality for a monochrome image? I know that sometimes you can get 100%jpeg for monochromes, but with all that detail it makes me wonder. Your picture is only 100kb out of the allowed 150kb you see. Saving it at the highest quality possible within the 150kb filesize limit ensures more edge and detail sharpness and for color images it keeps the colors more consistent.
My opinion
Cool effects, but needs some improvement.