Luz
by Vanessa 72

Comment by pitsaman:
OK,what the artist was trying to show me here?

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by Vanessa 72

Comment by marbo:
They look very happy.

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by Vanessa 72

Comment by BeingClever:
Very cute! Those smiles are priceless. The crop is a little tight for me, I don’t mind so much the boys shoulder being lost but the girl’s head would be better if it was not cropped off a bit. Kids are hard to shoot though, so who knows if you had time to frame it better. The only other thing I notice is the halo around their bodies, which is particularly noticeable in the area where their arms meet.

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by Vanessa 72

Comment by mocabela:
A little tightly cropped for my tastes, but this is an adorable couple of children who have been otherwise well captured. These are some great smiles and sparkly eyes! The colours look great too - very nice.

Luz
by Vanessa 72

Comment by PhantomEWO:
well not sure this one defines itself enough to do well

Luz
by Vanessa 72

Comment by docpjv:
not so sure what I see... or use;-)

Luz
by Vanessa 72

Comment by lentil:
pretty harsh on the eyes. What is it?

Luz
by Vanessa 72

Comment by traser:
what is it. seems out of focus and over exposed..alot of artifacts too

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by Vanessa 72

Comment by arpita:
There's a lot of potential in this picture, but I think it needs some more work to bring it out. The subjects are very sweet, and you have captured a great moment. A couple of things though. The girl's face is cutoff at the ear, and that is very distracting. Also the focus is not sharp enough, the light is bland. A little work in PS with curves, and some dodging of the eyes can help with this. Also with the composition as it is, the eye flits back and forth between the children and finally settles on the background, which incidentally seems to be pretty well focused.
You have photogenic subjects, though, esp. the little girl. You could probably get a stunning shot of just her with some good light and sharp focusing on the eyes.

Luz
by Vanessa 72

Comment by photogJames:
Sun light through a frosted bathroom window? or reflecting in water? That is a great abstract.