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Comment by lissylou:
Not fond of the expression (lack of one), it's just like you drugged her put her in the picture.

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Comment by alfresco:
Nice and crisp on the eyes and face with a good dof. I think it might add to the image to have her look at the camera, but I'd have to see that to say one way or the other. I do like her expression.

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Comment by aKiwi:
The eyes are beautiful and sharp. The image portrays shyness well.
Crop is pretty harsh on the right. Colour seems pretty yellowish, but I am on my not well calibrated monitor at home.

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Comment by mesmeraj:
this model has wonderful eyes. She would make for greta portraits. The exposed breast looks awkward in this photo, like the photographer said quick expose a nipple reaal fast. It does not seem to be part of the image. There is a lot of potential but the images is lacking a certain flow.

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Comment by LeeD:
The model looks very uncomfortable and the lighting could be better. I'm not crazy about the orientation... maybe rotate 90 degrees. I do like the cropping though.

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Comment by oOWonderBreadOo:
the color is way off on this models skin. looks like you are using the wrong kind of lighting. I'd suggest shooting next to a window for the natural tones. the composition/ crop is wonderful! the border just isn;t doing it for me. with such a simple beautiful photo it is kind of distracting.
(I just thought of something that might help the skin tone- selective color in the yellow channel. try messing around with that!)

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Comment by CEJ:
Well done. The splash of red works nicely. 8

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Comment by alien2thisworld:
Good focus on her left eye and nice lighting. The sparkle in her left eye really gives some life to the shot. I think I would like this shot a little more with a deeper DOF to keep her right eye, hair and shoulder in sharper focus.

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Comment by nico_blue:
i think the shot is a bit too yellow cast on the skin tone. (tungsten light source?)

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Comment by Jutilda:
Beautiful face. I wish the light weren't so yellow. Maybe work on desat a little. HEr eyes are just stunning.