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| 12/28/2005 09:18:13 AM |
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| 12/08/2005 07:20:39 PM |
Grown up artby photogenixComment by Di: ****Critique Club****
"Grown up art"
Your photo has a few problems I'd like to address.
1. Lighting - This looks to be all natural light. I would like to see more light highlighting the wall, whether by a reflector or by an additional light source. The wall looks dark and drab with out the additional light. I can see there was some light, as there is a shadow on the lower right hand. The shadow has a tendency, since there is not a specific other place to look, to draw the eye to it.
Using a photo program I'd like to see the texture of the wall brought out more.
2. The wall appears to be curved. I'm not sure if this is teh lens or the actual wall. I would have liked to see the wall more symetrical in the photo with the top equal on each side.
3. The graffiti is something that is more known to be from Teenagers and is not really associated with adults.
Good luck in future challenges. |
| 12/08/2005 11:24:29 AM |
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| 12/06/2005 09:19:57 PM |
Cellarby photogenixComment by tpoc: absolutely lovely shot of the rack, wall, and bottles. love the stripe of blue at the bottom and how the rack just floats. i would love to see this shot without the sign on the rack... |
| 12/06/2005 10:32:29 AM |
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| 12/04/2005 01:49:48 PM |
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| 12/04/2005 01:33:17 PM |
Darth Vaderby photogenixComment by AzCKelly: Interesting picture. I've looked at it pretty hard and still can't figure out what it is but I like the colors and the shapes are intriguing. |
| 12/04/2005 05:07:05 AM |
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| 12/02/2005 12:01:26 AM |
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| 11/30/2005 11:17:18 PM |
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