Country Living = Dark Nightsby
mcraelComment by HBunch: *Critique Club*
Well, there really isn't much to look at here, but living in the country myself, I can actually relate. It does say "Home" very nicely, especially to me on a personal level.
The visual appeal isn't really that high though. Cause there really isn't much to look at. I think that the most interesting part is the little porch to the left of the photo, but to the right of the barn. That wooden little inlet has the most detail of anything in this shot.
I do see though that if I jack up the brightness, I can see the outline of the house, and a hill in the yard. Even this is enough to add a bit of interest. I'm wondering if this is how you are seeing it on your moniter? With a slight more brightness?
When I set the moniter 'properly' this does appear to be a bit too dark. Definatley prefer it with the added brightness.
I think that the angle and framing/cropping are ok. The brightly lit garage/barn to the left kind of throws this off balance a bit. It's lit well, and detailed, and there isn't that kind of leverage on the right side of the photo.
For a low lighting shot, your focus appears to be very good. I see some detail in the wood slats to the left of the house.
Definately says home, and definately different, but lacking something to really make it stand out to me. Maybe it's jst as simple as a brightness adjustment.
~Heather~