In the darkness of lies
by TUBORG

Comment by rblanton:
Killer shot. Great definition, pose, colors... really nice one.

In the darkness of lies
by TUBORG

Comment by ratz:
I like the composition and the lighting looks good.

In the darkness of lies
by TUBORG

Comment by Longfist:
Beautiful!

Housebuilder
by TUBORG

Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Coy and cute.

Composition:
Very centred ... less of the fence on the left side would not have reduced this picture at all .. and would have allowed you to make him slightly larger and give more impact.

Subject:
meets the challenge and edoes so with flare.

Technical (Colour and light):
This is one area I didn't mind the post processing ... is a little too much like a painting for me .. but still works as a photo ...

To grow its vote?:
looking at the winners of this challenge .. cropping him differntly would have worked wonders ... e.g. inclue the hammer and lower hand .. out past the post slightly so you know that hes building ... and slightly closer to the top of his head.

Summary:
Great work .. keep it up .. you are definately going places.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Enlightment
by TUBORG

Comment by jpochard:
This is one of my favorites so far. The slight bit of yellow at the bottom helps add just a bit of brightness. The lighting and pose are both excellent. I wish the wrist watch was taken off, however. The background wall gives good texture and depth to the shot. Well done!

Enlightment
by TUBORG

Comment by posthumous:
I get a sense of a quotidian, fun sort of enlightenment, like suddenly realizing you've got a beer left in the fridge. Nice expression, nice use of light. 7.

Overprotected
by TUBORG

Comment by srdanz:
Nice idea, but the message didn't come across as lenscaps being overprotected. It looked to me rather like the operator is overprotected. I guess satin gloves would have made for a better effect than the hygienic rubber gloves :-)

Overprotected
by TUBORG

Comment by boyhuntsforbliss:
very

Enlightment
by TUBORG

Comment by aquarian11:
A definite 9.

Overprotected
by TUBORG

Comment by Bolti:
This one deserves to be the winner of this competition :)