Split Seam Fastball
by neophyte

Comment by Jutilda:
Very well done. Great detailing. I like your imaginative approach to this. Nicely done.

Entrenched
by neophyte

Comment by kawhona:
Excellent composition ... My only complaint is the dead space in the lower left takes away from the shot.

Pipes in the Sun
by neophyte

Comment by TooCool:
GREAT IDEA, but you have too much in the shot IMHO. If you would have cropped landscape style just about the rear disc and just below the back tire you would have a much simpler composition. Also, is this your bike? If so you shoulda arranged it so you didn't have such distracting objects so close to the end point of your leading lines. (the barrels and other bikes...)
TC

Entrenched
by neophyte

Comment by Linden:
Wow. A lot going on in this photograph to catch the eye. Good composition. I definite think B/W was the better choice, but I still wonder how it would have looked in color...

Pipes in the Sun
by neophyte

Comment by Mr_Pants:
This works really well in black & white as far as I'm concerned. The texture and detail speak for themselves.

Pipes in the Sun
by neophyte

Comment by Cam:
Beautiful bike, very elegant bike shot. The trash can is a tad intrusive...but overall well done, interesting perspective photo.

Imagining the Summit
by neophyte

Comment by LadeeM:
By looking at your portfolio, I definitely see that you know how to take a photo. I don't agree with some of these comments, that you just "stuck" a photo in here and gave it a name. That's not fair to you. I see where you were coming from. Don't let your low score get you down. Mine didn't do too hot either. :)

I love the fact that you caught him reaching for his next grasp. I agree with stdavidson, that setting a black point and then adjusting levels would have made a difference. Unfortunately, I think it was the photos content that got you the low score.

Good luck!

Message edited by author 2005-06-30 07:28:15.

Entrenched
by neophyte

Comment by drz01:
Lovely shot...

Entrenched
by neophyte

Comment by er0k:
very nice!

Entrenched
by neophyte

Comment by cools98:
Nice photo, but shadows on front grille are a little too dark.