Breakfast Ride
by neophyte

Comment by DefyTime:
:: Critique Club ::

Like I said already...cool B&W...but I will go further now. I like it because you have great contrast and good tonal range. You have a great subject and now I know the story behind it. So it's even that much "cooler" Great work

Dry Rhythm
by neophyte

Comment by hizcutie:
awh that reflection is very nice. Not sure but it almost looks like a railroad crossing.

Breakfast Ride
by neophyte

Comment by Art Roflmao:
Nice!

Moment of Silent Remembrance
by neophyte

Comment by DefyTime:
Great shot for the challenge

Moment of Silent Remembrance
by neophyte

Comment by Skip:
very nicely observed.

Windows Through The Panes
by neophyte

Comment by kari1:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:
Yup. Have to concur with the other commentors .. it lacks a little on on the interest side.

Composition:
The composition is fine .. and it works for what it is.

Subject:
Meets the challenge.

Technical (Colour and light):
Sharp .. nice colours ... good contrast .. the sky being gray just detracts from the interest .. it is hard that we can't just dictate the weather.

To grow its vote?:
Find a point of interesting which captures the viewer.

Summary:
Solid portfolio shot .. well done ..

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Moment of Silent Remembrance
by neophyte

Comment by saintaugust:
facing subject works better for journalism but this is good

Breakfast Ride
by neophyte

Comment by dahkota:
excellent B&W conversion. not sure if I like the sign or not but feel like an image of opportunity. 8

Breakfast Ride
by neophyte

Comment by mk:
Neat motorcycle shot but the sign in the back really detracts.

Breakfast Ride
by neophyte

Comment by arngrimur:
Good composition, cool chrome.