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by LesleyNelson

Comment by notonline:
As a photo I find it a little too busy. As interesting as it is the clarity puts it into the abstract sort of view which isn't a bad thing just not my liking. Good luck in this challenge. <5>

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Comment by fplouffe:
Nice effort. This is technically very difficult to acheive. More often thatn not, this kind of shot ends up blurred/fuzzy.

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Comment by BigMo:
Weird looking. Creepy actually. Nice idea.

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Comment by JunieMoon:
Very disturbing image. You did a great job of depicting any of various maladies connected to the mind. I would like to see this idea worked with a little more, though. I don't think it is the very best it could be. Not sure how to change it. If you have a manual setting for long exposure, maybe putting the cap back on between the movement of the face would have givien it a better affect.

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Comment by lissylou:
very creepy

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Comment by Xilebo:
Maybe not perfect technically but made me look carefully..

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Comment by Jutilda:
I like the scribbles coming out of the eyes. FUNKY!!!!

Lambs Ear Leaf
by LesleyNelson

Comment by gsquiggle:
Ah man, please please just desaturate the wood... that would have made it so powerful soooo much more powerful... Otherwise, good.

Lambs Ear Leaf
by LesleyNelson

Comment by tasha4paws:
good focus on wood, attracts the eye, a little soft on leaf, makes the leaf a secondary element.
Make your primary subject the focus point and let the background go.
leaf needs turning more upright to bring the top into the third rule.
would have left the leaf on a twig, it looks kinda lonely.
try using a mirror to direct the light/ shade if outside. good luck

Lambs Ear Leaf
by LesleyNelson

Comment by ToucanPam:
the glare on the wood is alittle distracting