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| 04/06/2006 07:27:25 PM |
Easterby thomaspeopleComment by LucidLotus: It is certainly yellow but there is not much else that draws me into this image. The clarity is a bit off (focus seems rather soft) and that might be because yellow is a pain in the tush to get good detail out of for some reason. The lighting seems a bit harsh, but there are no annoying shadows present so it works. I think the biggest thing for me is the composition doesn't have a high impact. I'm thinking the main problem is the hand holding the Peeps. Maybe if they were on a fork or something slender like a skewer so that the Peeps would be more central, there would be more negative space around them and then the addition of the models partial face would have an even higher impact, IMO. Also that bid of reddish-brown in the bottom right-hand corner (probably the model's hair?) is a bit distracting. I think - following the concept mentioned above - having that be all black background would help give more emphasis and focus on the two main subjects.. Peeps and mouth eating them. I gave a 4 |
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| 04/06/2006 01:46:11 AM |
Coldby thomaspeopleComment by Tully: Nice work on this shot... great idea to use ice to refract the light... |
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| 04/05/2006 08:18:17 PM |
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| 04/05/2006 08:06:08 PM |
Coldby thomaspeopleComment by BakerBug: The background color is perfect for this shot. It conveys the cool feeling and still allows you to see some color refracted from the ice. Well done! |
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| 04/05/2006 03:35:34 PM |
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| 04/05/2006 11:39:42 AM |
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| 04/05/2006 02:55:03 AM |
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| 04/04/2006 08:59:08 PM |
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| 04/04/2006 01:41:25 PM |
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| 04/04/2006 11:21:28 AM |
Easterby thomaspeopleComment by Strontious: obviously lit with a very harsh, on camera flash, try using window light next time and maybe including some background detail |
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