Scream
by thomaspeople

Comment by PlanetMaker:
Great execution of position and imagination

A Clean Well Lighted Place
by thomaspeople

Comment by Melethia:
Really quite an intriguing photograph!

Old Faithful
by thomaspeople

Comment by Melethia:
LOL!!! "often let me down"...

Kind of a strange challenge, but this definitely met it. Decent composition, crisp focus, different background. Who knows sometimes with these things.

Love the description!

Old Faithful
by thomaspeople

Comment by Cheerz:
Good colours and details.. but the crop makes the photo looks incomplete.
try a tighter crop or a wider shot... No solution for you.. but a 6 for me...

Gold
by thomaspeople

Comment by scarbrd:
---Greetings from the Critique Club!---

First impression - Neat idea!

This is a great idea for the challenge. I commend your creativity and executing your idea.

The composition is good, as is the lighting.

To say what would have made this score better, I think it needs some sort of context. With the stark white background it appears to be floating in space. I think if you would have set this up with a bowl of dip, or used a table as the background, you might have done a bit better. 5.58 is a good score, particularly with the competition here at DPC. Put as much thought into the setting as you did the idea and your score would have been high, IMO.

I hope this was helpful. Feel free to contact me if you have any questions.

David

Gold
by thomaspeople

Comment by md8speed:
Looks like you found the golden-bag of pretzels! Does that mean you get a tour of the pretzel factor? ;) Nice picture.

Gold
by thomaspeople

Comment by levyj413:
Heh. I was wondering whether anyone would shoot this subject. :)

Gold
by thomaspeople

Comment by Younger:
Very clever!

Gold
by thomaspeople

Comment by Shrink:
Great idea

Gold
by thomaspeople

Comment by pam90066:
great idea!