Another Day in the Storefront Window
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Comment by otisXmike:
photographing mannequins is fun... they cooperate so well and don't talk back! I like your composition and positioning of the 2 models in it.

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Comment by BrianR:
Good story, levels need not have been lowered as much, reducing the amount of shadow...7

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Comment by kscott:
intensly irritating. beutiful work!

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Comment by yanko:
Freaking awesome.

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Comment by posthumous:
presence is amplified by absence. 7

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Comment by sevilduvarci:
i like the processing and color composition.

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Comment by Nuzzer:
5: good idea. I think a less "on top" perspective may have added to this

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Comment by Neuferland:
Greetings from me! ;)

I see you never received the Critique you requested so here I am, hoping to fix that! :)

This is a lovely picture, I love the mood, the tone, the feel. You said you did lots of dodging and burning and I think some of the dodging might have hurt you a bit, as in you did a great job on the rocks that make the window but the dodging around the model is very noticable and there are lines everywhere around here. I'm betting if that wasn't as noticable you would have been a contender for a top 10 easily. The model is nice, a type of cloak would have completed the picture perfectly. If you redo this, take away some of the dodging around the model I would love to see it!

I hope my comments help and Good Luck in future Challenges!

Deannda

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Comment by ergates:
Very, very good. This is the first picture I've seen that totally meets the challenge and is beautiful too.

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Comment by Jutilda:
WOW - pretty "sterotypical" but it really works.