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Comment by iggy386:
I like this picture a lot, but I think of the front of the car wasn't in it, it would be more powerful. It might convey more of a sense of loneliness. Of course, that might not be what you had in mind!

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Comment by autool:
Composition: Subject Placement, Cropping, Background7,
Technical: Focus, Exposure, Lighting, Processing7,
Appeal: Is it Interesting, Motivating, Etc.? 8,
Total Averaged Rating7. Autool

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Comment by Yomi:
This is a nice shot. I like how the title relates to this picture perfectly.

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Comment by mscott821:
I like it. Something about the guardrail adds to it. Just wish the from of the car wasn't there.

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Comment by csb:
This is awesome! Truly, a photo worth 1000 words.

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Comment by byetko:
I wish it was a little lighter in the room. 6.

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Comment by HBunch:
Definately depicts childhood. I like the concept behind this, however the angle is a little odd. I think I would like to have seen more of the cake and on top of the table. You captured the candles very nicely, and the whole "birthday" theme is very clear. I wish the lighting were constant throughout the photo. It seems darker on the right than it is on the left. Overall great idea. Good luck in the challenge.

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Comment by mcrael:
Good perspective - a child's eye view. A little too dark on one side, and too light on the other. Good focus for the lighting conditions though.

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Comment by brianeden:
The photographer's son must be very smart and attractive.

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Comment by its:
good lighting