Foggy Morning
by Refocused

Comment by Imagineer:
Composition too central for me. I think the feeling of space is lacking due to the bonsai being 'framed' by the landscape around it. An off-centre position (try blocking the overpowering left side out of vision - it looks better) would have improved this.

Foggy Morning
by Refocused

Comment by DougPaz:
Nice Bonsai, looks like a Fukien Tea. This would be much improved if it wasn't sitting dead center in the frame. Moved over to the left and take out the rising slope there would have been much more dramatic. Good shot.

Foggy Morning
by Refocused

Comment by goodtempo:
i would have liked it better if i didn't see the pot.

Foggy Morning
by Refocused

Comment by dsidwell:
Placing the bonzai center makes IT the focus and suggests that IT is what we should be looking at almost exclusively. Using the rule of thirds would invite us to also look at its environment and would suggest that it belongs in this mysterious, foggy world. Your choice, of course, but I would experiment with moving it to one side or the other. 7

Can You Help Me Please?
by Refocused

Comment by GrandmaEMT:
There are so many shades and textures in this picture. I love it.

Can You Help Me Please?
by Refocused

Comment by rhipster:
Very appealing pic. Shame some parts are blurred. 8

Can You Help Me Please?
by Refocused

Comment by christyrack:
If that's not desolate...then I don't know what is!! Great picture!!

Can You Help Me Please?
by Refocused

Comment by Spork99:
This person seems truly desolate. Nice shot too

Inside And Looking Out (at you)
by Refocused

Comment by justesme:
Interesting image. However, I would have liked to see more of the drain pipe [being one of the most interesting subjects] and less of the wall on the bottom and right. I would persoanlly just chopped off all the bottom and right so the painting would be in the corner and see the full drainpipe. Half a drain pipe feels incomplete, I keep searching for the other half. Well done, Good try =)

Can You Help Me Please?
by Refocused

Comment by pitsaman:
Cute Russian grandma,10 from me!