Me as a mother
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unnevaComment by kari1: ::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
The critique I am doing is for "me as a mother" picture.
First Impression - the most important one:
my god, why did I draw this one, its great, its perfect .. she actually tells me the whole story of the picture!
Composition:
I like the composition of this shot. Black and white really did work, and I like the leading lines that go from your babies face to yours. You can tell that is one lucky wee man, cos his mum loves him.
Subject:
You can't really get a better choice of subject matter, as shown by eight of the top ten pictures.
Technical (Colour and light):
The use of contrast and lighting here is great. I also like the way the light plays on your hair.
To grow its vote?:
Do you need to grow the vote. Not this time really. This was a good scoring challenge, and you did score well.
Summary:
You have done some awesome work .. your portfolio really shows that.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari
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