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hvellurComment by Bolti: [Critique club]
Jæjja, nú er Ãslendingur kominn à Critique club :)
I like this picture and it is a excelent portrait and everyting so lets go through the steps that I have seen from other Critique club members.
Composition:
Its a nice image and the guys position in the frame is good but the thing that I can find on it is that the guy behind his head is kinda distracting so you might have cropped him away or tried to get rid of him into some black mist made with curves or higlight burn.
Lighting:
Ligting is cool, dunno if you used a fill flash but the light puts the attention straight at his face
Post-Processing:
This is something that this picture is lacking I think. You could have worked this picture very much better with different settings like curves, levels, dodge and burn. You should use it to your advantage that it is a memberchallenge so that you can truly use the whole spectra of the rules.
Suggestion/Improvements:
Nothing much I can say to improve but to burn the guy behind him away :) Other then that a very nice portrait.
Vonandi hjálpar þetta eithvað :) og gangi þér vel à keppnunum og mundu að við erum með okkar eigin Ãslensku útgáfu af þessu :) Getur séð meira um það à prófælnum mÃnum :)
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