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Comment by Prime_Time:
A few things you could do to improve your image, one cropping in from the sides removing the silver frames, two adding more contrast, three blurring background object. I used the elliptical marquee tool, by pulling out a nice big circle then inversing it. Then I filled with black paint and blurred it to remove the sharp circle edge. Then you drop the opacity down to about 10%. Give you a better image. Also this helps the viewer focus on the subject.

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Comment by LalliSig:
Somehow this doesn´t seem as sharp as it could be other than that, very mediocre, I mean, it´s just a shop window and compared to the effort many others put into this challenge, this pales in comparison... 4 from me.

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Comment by LalliSig:
Wish this photo were sharper, it´s a bit too soft for my taste. Good compostition.

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Comment by mysticred:
Excellent shot.I love the colors. It is 10 from me.

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Comment by deapee:
This is a photo of a window with bread in it...

It doesn't really tell a story like it probably could...compositionally, you should think about drawing the viewer into the frame, leading their eye where it should go, and giving it something to rest on.

A polarizer could help to minimize your reflection that you got of yourself.

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Comment by 2mccs:
nice shot. Did you mean to have the reflection?

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Comment by Nobody:
Pretty colors. Next time, shoot from a slight angle so you dont' end up as a reflection in the window.

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Comment by Rikki:
i would have cropped tighter on the edges for this shot

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Comment by ericwoo:
Very nice. I might have composed just a bit differently to include the rest of the basket handle, but that would be about the only change that I'd make. Great colors and crisp focus.

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Comment by Jaded_Housewife:
nice job catching him/her with the food in his mouth. seems a little overexposed at the top, but i like it.