Five Loaves Bakery
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Comment by loseme:
*Critique Club*

"Five Loaves Bakery" is a nice entry into the Window Framed challenge.

The image itself has a different subject which I think grabs attention. I really like your idea and think you have a great idea. The contrast between the green and the red also grabs attention and enhances the shot. Unfortunately the reflections that we can see in the glass take away from the overall image. Also I might have tried cropping it a little differently. I would have tried it tighter on the right side like on half way on the column. Also possibly cropped the pole on the left side out completely because it is distracting because of how uneven it looks.

Overall this was a great idea and I look forward to your future works!

"When The Rubber Hits The Road"
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Comment by AllanL:
I would have crop this differently to show the rubber and the road more prominently.

"When The Rubber Hits The Road"
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Comment by YourBuddyFlo:
the scene could have been better

"When The Rubber Hits The Road"
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Comment by amandalore:
great focus and DOF

Shadow
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Comment by SandyP:
I love this!!!

Shadow
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Comment by Kivet:
cool shot, love how the horse is looking at you, well timed.

Five Loaves Bakery
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Comment by I Enjoy Ham:
5 loaves, theres like 20 loaves there!! :)

Five Loaves Bakery
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Comment by BobsterLobster:
A bit like a snapshot, your reflection in the window really takes away from this shot. Some nice colours and textures though.

Five Loaves Bakery
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Comment by facesastheycome:
I like the idea ,but the crop is very tight and may be more of the window wold of done well in this image ,the other thing is i can see your reflection in the window :)

Five Loaves Bakery
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Comment by Sunniee:
Well seen and executed, great complimentary colors in the shot... not too cluttered, only one theme of interest, well done!