Watching YOU watch HER...by
eyesightphotoComment by zagman: Greetings from the Critique Club. Thank you for entering the DPChallenge, Outside Looking In.
Good capture of the women inside the room. She appears to be busy doing her toenails or dressing herself. This sort of fits into the voyuerism category. She watching you, you watching her, the viewer watching all.
You certainly are outside looking in. It looks like a dorm room, with the book in plain view. The mini blinds are open just right. There is enough of the women and the room to form an opinion.
The position of the camera is also very interesting. It appears to have been raised up. It stands in the middle of the frame, capturing the person outside and the subject inside.
Technically a good job accomplished. Good light source, focused, a long shutter used (2.5 seconds). You have both people freezing in place for the long exposure. There is an ominous shadow behind the woman. It almost looks like a shadow outline of a photographer. No matter, it does not distract from the photo. Pretty good for a last minute set up shot.
Good job, I am sure that it will appeal to the voters.
Good luck in your next DPChallenge, Zagman.
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