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Comment by bmoore:
collection?

I've EVEN number of an ODD xtra flesh!
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Comment by KiwiShotz:
::: Critique Club :::
Well, this is an odd entry to critique. It's very difficult to share some thoughts with you as you've not made any comments about what you were trying to achieve and what your toughts on the outcome are.

First Impression - the most important one:
An out of focus, indistinct snapshot that isn't close to the challenge brief.

Subject:
I can't see how this meets the Even challenge at all and the title just makes it worse, it doesn't make sense.

Technical (Colour and light):
The lighting is careless because you can see the overexposed window. The focus is terrible.

To get a Ribbon?:
Re-shoot it. Use a light source that's not visible, focus it, make it relevant to the challenge and give it a title that can be understood - although it should say 'even' without its title.

Summary:
I can't believe this image made a 4.9. It's only worth 2-3 at the most. The fact that it scored more just adds to its sleaze value.

Brett

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Comment by mandrade:
remind me again what part of this is considered collections.

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Comment by brianhendee:
I don't think the grainy look adds anything.

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Comment by graphicfunk:
What an expression on this beauty. Very well captured as the kitten is protected from the harsh brightness. Creative use of light to make a fine image. Bumping up.

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Comment by rick13601:
Interesting pic...I like the experimentation that takes away the snap shot effect..the use of grain, tilting, smaller size..etc. I wish it had more of a "collection" feel to it such as using multiple kittens instead of one.

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Comment by Elaine:
I'm not sure what the collection is.

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Comment by seancgn68:
Not sure I see a collection here...

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Comment by BigK:
COllections?

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Comment by chet:
Too grainy.