Separation Cafe
by mar10029

Comment by daisy77:
nice shot. the stare packs a punch.

George
by mar10029

Comment by gattamarta:
I don't like this picture because I can't understand what it displays and it is out of focus

Separation Cafe
by mar10029

Comment by PhotoRyno:
Good B&W although I do not feel the separation

Separation Cafe
by mar10029

Comment by whiteroom:
julia?

Separation Cafe
by mar10029

Comment by Pano:
The two women give it a nice effect, but it is not separation in my opinion

George
by mar10029

Comment by Catherine_B:
Oh boy, what happened here? Either you intentionally shot a grainy noisy shot, in which case it doesn't appeal to me at all, or you are new at digital photography and learning. If you are new, keep working at it. The foreground trees are very distracting and the rest of the image is not discernable.

George
by mar10029

Comment by w24x192:
I guess this is a bridge that is under repairs...I'm working on trying to figure this out. As far as the image goes, I can't say that I like it. But who am I? Anyway, if you could have oriented yourself to get a clearer shot of the bridge without the trees, or could have had a slightly different composition (not so centered and stagnant), I would have rated you higher. The noise doesn't bother me...I think noise is fine.

George
by mar10029

Comment by Imagineer:
Shooting for brown? You may just snatch it with this specimen. It's a masterful collection of DPC golden rules broken, disregarded and smashed to pieces - poor focus, noise, subject and composition - all quite dreadful. Good luck with yourr quest.
:D

George
by mar10029

Comment by Mr_Pants:
I can't quite make out what this is. The main subject is not sharp enough and the trees at the bottom are too intrusive.

George
by mar10029

Comment by puzzled:
This is very grainy - maybe that's how you wanted it, though. It's hard for me to give any helpful criticism on this because it's really too grainy and out of focus for me to leave any more helpful comments. Keep entering the challenges, though. This reminds me of my first entry.