Smiths
by justinbrook

Comment by neophyte:
Nice Job! Fantastic comp and Text Placement. Direct and to the point, no doubt what's being sold. Bottom font color needs to be darker (maybe both) and capiltalized.Good message.

Smiths
by justinbrook

Comment by bcoble:
Too light and blends in with the background. I believe the pocket watch would show itself better if not so light and perhaps a different background color.

Greenfields
by justinbrook

Comment by Gauti:
practising for minimalism? good shot, the horizon maybe a fraction lower, the green and blue go well together.

Smiths
by justinbrook

Comment by Brad:
Very clear, simple & uncluttered submission.
Nice job on the lighting here. Only suggestion would be a different font for the main title, such as one that looks similar to the watch face. Good shot regardless.

Smiths
by justinbrook

Comment by RedOak:
Very nice composition. Lighting is simple but efficient. Its nice to see the white background is mastered, with no yellow burns around the shadows. The text is simple and catchy, but suffered because of the image compression (all the curves). Also the second part of the text is kind of odd, as its disapearing, making it harder to read. One suggestion would be to reshoot without hidding the "smiths" on the watch. That's the important part of the watch, which is partially hidden. GW. 8

Smiths
by justinbrook

Comment by snackwells:
I like the soft lighting and the composition. The lettering is OK, but it appears too sharp (aliased and jagged).

Smiths
by justinbrook

Comment by Artan:
Well taken shot, The clock look very good, the letterring unfortunatly has not sized smoothly.
Adding the text after sizing should cure this ......

Greenfields
by justinbrook

Comment by Mr_Pants:
To me, the horizon looks a little tilted and I feel that perhaps it's a little too centred in the frame.

Smiths
by justinbrook

Comment by singsunshine:
Very simply, very clear. good job.

Greenfields
by justinbrook

Comment by cheekymunky:
Colours look a bit over saturated (but that could be my monitor!), a serene image