waiter
by mreza

Comment by metoecus:
The angled railing in the foreground adds compositional interest, but I think that too much space was given to it and not quite enough to the waiter; his head is uncomfortably close to the edge of the frame.

waiter
by mreza

Comment by Tammer:
For me, had more of the foreground been cropped out I would have scored this better. I like your angle and concept though.

waiter
by mreza

Comment by LalliSig:
Not a bad idea but I would have liked this more if the vertical line (I guess it´s a railing) were lower in the frame and the whole shot was brighter, the whole section where the waiter is is very dark and it´s very hard to make out any details. 4 from me.

waiter
by mreza

Comment by Bud:
Nice concept, this image would benefit from being rotated and then cropping out the railing(?) in the foreground.

waiter
by mreza

Comment by KarenNfld:
The diagonal line at the bottom is really distracting. I think this would have been a better image if you had focused entirely on the scene of tables and chairs.

waiter
by mreza

Comment by srugolo:
Don't like the bottom part.

waiter
by mreza

Comment by tpoc:
nice idea for your submission. when i look at this picture, it looks like some person reading a paper more than a waiter, imo. i like the angle of the shot, and the color treatment works with it. i would be interested in seeing a closer shot of the person in the shadow with the table. the guy standing in shadow with the white paper really pops out, and focusing in on him without all the empty tables could be interesting...

waiter
by mreza

Comment by Dusty:
Nice concept. I would have liked to see a few ciustomers though.

waiter
by mreza

Comment by AzCKelly:
Interesting angle. I would crop the roofline at the bottom though. Its pretty distracting.

waiter
by mreza

Comment by Jutilda:
THis has interesting perspective. It just lacks a true focal point. Maybe a single person sitting with a cup of coffee would've worked better.