ANZAC Day - Remembering a fallen soldier
by hsvhoon

Comment by wester:
great sentiments, no photo. too cluttered, not clear what is happening.

ANZAC Day - Remembering a fallen soldier
by hsvhoon

Comment by Joey Lawrence:
Could have been more effective if you got chose a different angle away from the big shadows

ANZAC Day - Remembering a fallen soldier
by hsvhoon

Comment by Man_Called_Horse:
interesting use of theme

ANZAC Day - Remembering a fallen soldier
by hsvhoon

Comment by e301:
I think you need to put some work into composition - this just doesn't work: the near-centred placing of the people, cutting the horizon through them like that, the big shadows in the edges of frame. Couple that with a rather over-exposed image as a whole, and it's bad news: you could bring the levels down in the entire thing, which would bring life to the colours and the sky. But its that compositional thing that lets this idea down for me.

ANZAC Day - Remembering a fallen soldier
by hsvhoon

Comment by BAMartin:
This does meet the challenge and does tell a story, but unfortunately the story takes place too far away to see any of the interesting details.

ANZAC Day - Remembering a fallen soldier
by hsvhoon

Comment by whagerbaumer:
Cropping out long shadows would help a lot, as would increasing contrast.

ANZAC Day - Remembering a fallen soldier
by hsvhoon

Comment by cosmic:
Nice concept but a lot of little things to fix. In my opinion only, :) you should have chose another angle to shoot this from. The shade from the tree on the right, and the rail on the left distracts you from the focus point (2 women). The brick from the stairs is also distracting.

The shot lacks crispness and sharpness. Perhaps if shot a tad more zoomed in, or made it a vertical shot would work better?

ANZAC Day - Remembering a fallen soldier
by hsvhoon

Comment by train:
not good focus but sad

ANZAC Day - Remembering a fallen soldier
by hsvhoon

Comment by buzzmom:
an emotional subject but just not a minimalistic one...no clear subject...just one persons opinion

ANZAC Day - Remembering a fallen soldier
by hsvhoon

Comment by Zed Pobre:
Lots of things to look at here, so I'm not sure exactly what the subject is. The people? Image seems a little out of focus, and could probably use a slight contrast boost.