5:55 on 05/05/05 @ 25.5 degrees
by benhur

Comment by cherylogle:
This took some patience. :)

5:55 on 05/05/05 @ 25.5 degrees
by benhur

Comment by justine:
I see your five's here! Lots of them. I do think the composition looks tossed together. It's a clock on a desk with marks, partial monitor. Take more time to set up your shots, crop them a bit tighter, be sure there aren't marks or dust, dirt in your shots. Hope this is helpful to you.

5:55 on 05/05/05 @ 25.5 degrees
by benhur

Comment by dafragsta:
OK

5:55 on 05/05/05 @ 25.5 degrees
by benhur

Comment by marvin:
Single out the clock then. What is the monitor doing in this picture?

5:55 on 05/05/05 @ 25.5 degrees
by benhur

Comment by whagerbaumer:
Nice crisp image. A little bit of cleaning of the desk top and lighting under the monitor become almost necessary when the image is so clear. An 8.

Moor Hen on Bank of Canel
by benhur

Comment by msneish:
I like it, but my eye begs for a wider angle on the right edge. The idea seems cut off.

Moor Hen on Bank of Canel
by benhur

Comment by metoecus:
If not for the title I would have never figured out what your intended subject was.

Moor Hen on Bank of Canel
by benhur

Comment by risu81:
The hen is a small part of the picture, but I'm not sure of the minimalistic angle here. 4

Moor Hen on Bank of Canel
by benhur

Comment by tommyd65:
IMO the hen is a bit too small to be a strong point of the pic.

Moor Hen on Bank of Canel
by benhur

Comment by wester:
the bird does not attact the attention at all. I had to read the headline and take a very good look at the photo to get an idea of what you were trying to do. and even hen there is nothing intersting to see here.
improment possibilities:
get the bird at a visible size
change your angle
get the bridge out of the picture, or get the bird in the place where your attention is focused by the bridge.