Sparkle
by twm122

Comment by jerowe:
gorgeous model. distracting background, though. good job, nonetheless

Sparkle
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Comment by davmct:
model looks completely disinterested

Yellow Flowers, Blue Sky
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Comment by theskitch6:
Nice depth of field. Maybe a little too light.

Yellow Flowers, Blue Sky
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Comment by sump:
Pretty, I like the focus but the pictures kind of crowded.

Sparkle
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Comment by docurrie:
The model is stunning you captured her eyes wonderfully. The back ground however takes away from the overall effect.

Sparkle
by twm122

Comment by pixieland:
Beautiful model, but the background and the light hitting her so harshly in the top of her head are really hurting the photo.

Yellow Flowers, Blue Sky
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Comment by olddj:
pretty picture, but nothing special about the perspective for me

Sparkle
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Comment by JEFFJSB:
really like the model and her hair-excellent for portraits. She needs to be smiling sincerely, better lighting on her and find a better background.

Sparkle
by twm122

Comment by tjbel05:
Beautiful model, but backround is too busy, and lighting bouncing off head is distracting.

Sparkle
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Comment by jpochard:
This is a lovely lady, but I would like see more focus on her freatures and less on the background and apparel. She is dark in comparison to the background and my eyes are first drawn to the bright green in the sunshine. Her eyes kind of get lost as the lighting on her is all evenly dark. Her expression also doesn't seem to fit with what she's wearing. With sparkle and cleavage like that I would like to see a more playful, sexy look. She just seems bored to me here. Also, although she appears to be very tan, the tone seems very red hued.

She's a lovely model and hopefully you'll have the chance to keep working with her to practice more portrait work. Just one woman's opinion but I hope this is helpful.