Party or Study?
by Montereykiddo

Comment by Barry:
I am not considering titles in this challenge, and looking for images that meet the challenge description visually...

Meets challenge description.......5
Technical......4
Artistic.............6

average.....5

Party or Study?
by Montereykiddo

Comment by Shan9420:
I like this, but I think I would have had the bottle and book more in focus and the man a little less.

Party or Study?
by Montereykiddo

Comment by Pedxer:
too good!

Chris-Bus-Card2.jpg
by Montereykiddo

Comment by grizzlybrice:
I'd make the font of the company name match the websites. That's just my only critique for now.
Not that big of a fan on the font for what you do.
Good start though.

B

Gritty Emotion
by Montereykiddo

Comment by afarland:
nice to have such a willing model! the sand really adds to this portrait, and the texture created by sand and skin is captured well. hope this one scores high for you!

Sandy Apple
by Montereykiddo

Comment by mocabela:
I'm amazed that this didn't do better - it's overall very appealing with the neutral sand colour and the vivid red of the apple; the only thing I would like to see is a slightly tighter crop on the right side and bottom to make the apple more centred in the bottom righthand corner, and to give it a little more negative space to the left. This has an almost abstract feel to it; it would look lovely with a thick black mat/frame. Nice job!

businesscard.jpg
by Montereykiddo

Comment by fitmpdnsthtr:
I think it's pretty good, but try making her eyes like a really nice blue or a green or something, make them pop, just a suggestion.

Gritty Emotion
by Montereykiddo

Comment by superwide:
Excellent framing of the subject!

Beautiful Gaze by Window Light
by Montereykiddo

Comment by jfaulkner:
Great focus. Perhaps a bit of more light on the shodaowed side of her face.. Still I like the shot. 8

Beautiful Gaze by Window Light
by Montereykiddo

Comment by ergo:
It's a nice enough photograph. The focus on the eyes is very nice, the lighting works. But I found the hairy wrist not flattering.