Bride
by Montereykiddo

Comment by rachelellen:
Interesting and original use of the theme. Prettily done, and well-posed.

Bride
by Montereykiddo

Comment by ecdillon:
I like the positioning of the images in the frame here. Nice overlapping.

grant_tunnel.jpg
by Montereykiddo

Comment by gurlwithapen:
i really like this..is it for an album cover or something? anyway, cool shot.

Molly Noyes - vintage
by Montereykiddo

Comment by sprite777:
Chris,

Beautiful photograph of a beautiful (and very natural) model. I think the lighting is good, the detail is adequate, and her hair is great. I agree with the other commenter, however, that perhaps the cropping is the least interesting part of this picture. If you turned the cropping horizontally, it wouldn't seem so claustrophobic. There is something about the cropping in addition to her head tilt that make it seem like she's in a box. :)

The only other thing I would do is bump the contrast, only because there should be a better balance of darks and lights in a portrait, and this is more and the dark side that anything.

Kudos though, I still really like this.

-- Critique Club

Molly Noyes - vintage
by Montereykiddo

Comment by PollyBean:
nice lines and softness

Molly Noyes - vintage
by Montereykiddo

Comment by DrAchoo:
The nostalgic feel is achieved here. I'm glad you weren't scared of using grain. 8

Molly Noyes - vintage
by Montereykiddo

Comment by SandyP:
What a wonderful composition. I love the vintage feel to this. . .and she is such a beautiful model -- so comfortable looking in front of the camera.

Molly Noyes - vintage
by Montereykiddo

Comment by fotodude:
framing of the head is alittle odd, but i can live with it, the hair here is very pretty and i wish the it was a horz. orientation and the face was far left only half showing and the hair taking up the rest of the frame....inother words, great lighting and start but a different framing is required here...IMO, Good luck

Molly Noyes - vintage
by Montereykiddo

Comment by dewed:
would have looked more natural if very high contrast

Empty
by Montereykiddo

Comment by Qart:
Good use of wide angle although perhaps a little more interest in the picture would be good... more contrast perhaps.