Light and shadow
by Melethia

Comment by KaDi:
Lovely quality of line and texture. I like the rhythm of the wall as it echoes the lines in the vase-like object. Interesting abstraction.

Light and shadow
by Melethia

Comment by climbin2thetop:
i like the texture of the shadows on the stucco

Missing Man Formation
by Melethia

Comment by dahkota:
This blows the positive away. Excellent work and eye to see this before it was there...

Light and shadow
by Melethia

Comment by dahkota:
like the play of light and shadow. Image feel slightly off balance but not sure why. toning echo well done. 7

High-end Chrome
by Melethia

Comment by noodleboy:
I really like this photo, its really shiny and composed well,


Message edited by author 2006-05-05 15:01:54.

Missing Man Formation
by Melethia

Comment by kirsty_mcn:
~Trading Post~

This is a great example of where the negative is a lot more dynamic than the positive. First of all, congrats on the 2nd best score to date.

The inversion has really brought out the textures in the marble (?) of the sculptures. The colours are very bold and contrasting. This all adds together to make a really bold, cool, graphical image.
The thing that distracts here imo is the background - it gives context with the inversion, but detracts from the very graphical style of the photo. I'd like to see a lower angle, so that the trees disappear into the horizon, and are barely noticeable.

Other than that, you've caught it at a good time of day light-wise - I love how the shadows on the righthand faces give the bold, contrasting white outline in negative. Overall, great image, good work, well done etc.
Keep it up, its an honour to critique :)

Missing Man Formation
by Melethia

Comment by BeeCee:
I like the sharp clarity against the empty sky. It gives a stark power which, for this sculpture with its particular meaning, is very effective. The only change I might have liked is a shallower DOF to really bring it out alone against the bit of background. That's very minor, though.

Staccato stilled; bass line lingers
by Melethia

Comment by DefyTime:
Great color in this...good exposure

Light and shadow
by Melethia

Comment by JohnBeebe:
Repetition works but I would lose the right one fifth. Crop in the midde of the jar.

Missing Man Formation
by Melethia

Comment by chalice:
Wonderful picture. Love the background and the diagonal lines. I have no idea how to improve on this. : )