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MelethiaComment by obsidian: Great shot as usual, Deb. Thought I would make you my guinea pig for the scoring pro forma I have been developing. Hope you find it useful.
Challenge: Empty Room
Challenge Description: Your challenge this week. Take one thing and your camera into an empty room and photograph it. (Advanced Editing)
A Score re meeting the challenge
{ 0} Does not meet challenge
{+1} Clearly meets the challenge
**{+2} Epitomises the idea behind the challenge
For me, this is an excellent example of how I saw the challenge being realised.
B Composition & Aesthetics
{ 0} No discernible compositional form or merit
{+1} Snap-shot like composition
**{+2} Well composed, aesthetically pleasing
{+3} An exceptional composition/exceptional aesthetics
The tones are superb and the use of the rule of thirds on the major verticals all work well. The cast shadow adds a degree of poignancy to the mood of the picture.
C Technical Considerations
{ 0} Technically flawed
{+1} Technically OK
**{+2} Technically well executed
{+3} Evidence of technical mastery/wizardry
Clean rendition of the shot, in line with the minimalist aesthetic expected of the subject matter.
D WOW Factor
{ 0} Not special/ordinary
{+1} Has some degree of impact
**{+2} Obvious impact
{+3} Slaps you in face
This picture does it for me in a quietly stated way.
Total score: 8
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