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| 11/05/2008 08:08:41 AM |
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| 11/03/2008 03:15:41 AM |
Evening Snackby Bear_MusicComment by Gabriel: I'm not that suprised at the relatively low score of this one (but I have many shots scored way lower than that).
The DOF and subtle light are perfect, but...
*The noise is problematic, especially the red component of it. I personally don't like color noise, in my mind this is associated to "low quality P&S/phone". I understand that you decided to add this noise, which is your own choice, fine. But it would probably have scored better if you only added luminance noise instead of color noise. Luminance noise can sometimes fool the viewer into thinking "grain", while color noise most of the time can't.
*Framing. (I am coming from a part of the world where we write from left to right, so Arabic or Asian people might have a different opinion on this)
The gull is going to the right, and his head is aligned on the upper right Rule of Third point. But as it is moving, I know that he is going to the right. The problem is that his head is already quite close to the right border of the frame, and he doesn't have much space to move within the frame. When looking at this pic, I then have the feeling that the gull will soon go out of the frame, leading me to already reconsider the picture without the gull in it. Having more empty space on the right would have allowed me to have a better, more "static" look at this picture. |
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| 11/02/2008 12:53:39 PM |
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| 11/02/2008 07:13:50 AM |
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| 10/30/2008 12:58:35 PM |
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| 10/29/2008 11:37:03 AM |
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| 10/29/2008 10:30:56 AM |
gull at sunsetby Bear_MusicComment by glad2badad: This is a nice shot. Very colorful...and therein is a minor problem IMO. The bird gets lost a little in all of that sparkle. Of the two, I prefer your entry substantially more. Also, this photo is more static than the other. I like the sense of movement and diagonals in the one you submitted. |
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| 10/29/2008 10:26:50 AM |
gull at sunsetby Bear_MusicComment by salmiakki: I loved your original entry and honestly, even though the light here is awesome, on balance I still prefer the one you entered.
As I commented previously, don't understand your score, as I think it is a great pic. |
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| 10/29/2008 10:17:05 AM |
gull at sunsetby Bear_MusicComment by MaryO: I like the composition of the other one better with the wave lapping at the beach on the diagonal, but the colors here are really harmonious. Silver and gold. |
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| 10/28/2008 11:59:32 AM |
Evening Snackby Bear_MusicComment by snaffles: Hi Bear! I am so glad I gave this shot a 9, despite/because of the noise. It's a lovely shot, great motion, and the textures add an almost otherworldly quality. Well done, wish it had scored higher! |
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