Bread Line
by drake217

Comment by TDCollins:
Lighting needs improvement

Bread Line
by drake217

Comment by srbrubaker:
Exposure, and color seem wrong. Also, it's a bit of a static pose. Yes, It's hard to believe but there must be sixty four ways of making sliced bread more dynamic.

Bread Line
by drake217

Comment by Ecce_Signum:
One of the few times its good to add the challenge name into the title - very clever. Compostition is great but (on my monitor) I think the bread should be whiter.

Bread Line
by drake217

Comment by admart01:
your lighting let you down here -- I do like the play on words.

Bread Line
by drake217

Comment by nordic:
lightly under exposed, but interesting idea...

Winter Pines
by drake217

Comment by Mr_Pants:
Great pattern. I feel that perhaps it could bear a little more sharpening.

Winter Pines
by drake217

Comment by SnapperL:
This photo does not do it for me. The image looks jumbled, there are no leading lines to follow. The contrast of the snow on top and branch on bottom is nice though 5

Winter Pines
by drake217

Comment by nards656:
Revisiting and explaining my lower scores - I hope to be helpful, not insulting.

I only rated this a 4 because the photo feels very flat and cluttered. The snow is somewhat overexposed, and there is nothing to lead my eye into the photo. It feels like you should have taken one step to the left to open up a corridor and use it for a leading line.

Good luck!

White Feather on Snow
by drake217

Comment by funkydonkey:
Great detail shown here.. i would have liked it better if it was on a lighter background.

The Ultimate Passing of Time
by drake217

Comment by Pixel Lady:
Morbid but true. Looks slightly to yellow.