Family Road Trip
by okiesisi

Comment by Artyste:
heh.. love the feet sticking up in the back.. don't get a no-seatbelt ticket! :)

Laura Lei's Easter
by okiesisi

Comment by Skip:
i can assume from the square crop that you trimmed out some uninteresting, non-supportive parts of the frame. i would suggest that you could have gone on a trimmed in a just bit tighter. even though her face is the bright spot, it does get lost in all the detail of the rest of the image, and that's a shame, because she needs to be a bit stronger in order to preserve interest in the image.

Laura Lei's Easter
by okiesisi

Comment by ebertdj:
Bit of a snapshot - but good capture..... 8

Laura Lei's Easter
by okiesisi

Comment by nfessel:
The person in the purple shirt detracts from the subject.

Laura Lei's Easter
by okiesisi

Comment by Man_Called_Horse:
don't like ear shots. dimensional value lost. nice color. nice lighting. mom distracting.

Her husband's "work truck"
by okiesisi

Comment by GBrummett:
*Critique Club*

Hello,
As a Stock Photograph, this one might be difficult to sell. The best thing going in this shot is the perspective. You picked a good place to shoot. Yes, the picture would be better without the power lines. The natural darkening of the sky at the top of the picture helps keep my eyes on the two subjects, so that is a plus. I would liked to have seen their faces. I think that would have added to this shot. My eye keeps wandering to the lower right. That area seems a bit bright so bringing that down alittle would also help.

Waiting to go.....
by okiesisi

Comment by sammy_stecchino:
Boredom in this sense is always GOOD, that's what we tell my sister who is over there . . .

Her husband's "work truck"
by okiesisi

Comment by okiesisi:
I just want to clarify...at the time I submitted this one, I thought editing out the powerlines would be against the rules...and no matter how poorly it did, I still like it alot.
~~SiSi

Her husband's "work truck"
by okiesisi

Comment by dsa157:
cool point of view. I would have preferred it without the power lines and the cup of coffee in her hands

Waiting to go.....
by okiesisi

Comment by ace flyman:
sky a little cyan looking, over all good shot..........5