Self
by DigiFotoBuddy

Comment by Rebecca:
Good choice with the red background, though I don't like that I can see so much of the white shirt.

Self
by DigiFotoBuddy

Comment by cheegirl:
nice colour and clarity

Dusky Pulsating City
by DigiFotoBuddy

Comment by loseme:
*Critique Club*


"Dusky Pulsating City" is a very attention grabbing entry into the DPC Cinema challenge.

The first thing that grabs my attention is the bright city lights. You did an excellent job capturing the colors of the lights in balance to the sunset. Unfortunately the some of the brighter lights draw attention to the focus being a little off, possibly the camera was bumped. I think if the clarity was stronger it would have helped the score.

It was interesting to see more of a landscape shot not in the long length way most shots are done. I think if you had gone with a longer width you might have lost the interesting greenish building down towards the bottom.

I think this challenge was a little harder because voters, like myself but a little more emphasis on the subject. I personally looked at the shots for the photographic quality and also the believability as a movie. Your was more interesting as a movie because of the title you gave it, so defiantly good work on the title.

Overall nice work and I look forward to your future entries.

Self
by DigiFotoBuddy

Comment by MWitt:
Really good color and nice job on not getting highlights on the glasses. Great work.

Self
by DigiFotoBuddy

Comment by kiwiness:
You look like a very friendly person!

C.H.I.C.A.G.O.
by DigiFotoBuddy

Comment by alexgarcia:
From the CTP MkII

First Impression: WOW. What a wonderful skylight.

Composition: Very nice. I don't know if it's lighty tilted. Maybe with less sky was better, but I know that with restrictions of size on DPC would have worked worse on score.

Subject: Beautiful. That skyline, with the reflections, the lights,...

Technical: Very good exposure, colors OK.

Improvement: see composition

Summary: Really great shot to hang on a living room.

Álex

Dusky Pulsating City
by DigiFotoBuddy

Comment by alexgarcia:
From the CTP MkII

First Impression: Wonderful sky

Composition: the sky is on thirds, and in the city there's a disgonal on the right, but it seems a bit busy or chaotic with all that light.

Subject: OK, nice title and subject

Technical: I'm not sure if it's my monitor, but I see the lights of the city a bt blurred. Red color is really great. You capture a nice tonality.

Improvement: It's difficult, but IMO this photo needs a pattern, some shape on the lights, not sure about how to achieve it, sorry

Summary: Nice colors but a bit busy. Keep shooting.

Álex

Self
by DigiFotoBuddy

Comment by LalliSig:
Could this be or most improved photographer from the WPL? Somehow this face rings a bell anyway, is this Shailesh? Good shot anyway, just could benefit from a less strong colored backround and softer lighting, that´s all but above average in this challenge, 6 from me.

Self
by DigiFotoBuddy

Comment by hotpasta:
good clear shot with great colour, but I find the lighting a little harsh

Self
by DigiFotoBuddy

Comment by Jutilda:
Sully! This is excellent. Nice lighting and expression. Clear focus. You did good!!! (not nuts about the red, but otherwise - a-ok) You just jump out at me. Bumping up. Great SP