AdventureBlue
by messerschmitt

Comment by parrothead:
Not really high contrast to my eyes, but I LOVE the shot! 8

groovin'
by messerschmitt

Comment by tate:
I really like the crowded feeling here ... and the real ness

groovin'
by messerschmitt

Comment by afox2004:
I'd crop a little more off the top (to the top of their heads) so the band is the center of the photograph. My eyes keep wandering off the top and it makes the photo look cluttered.

Hot August Night
by messerschmitt

Comment by Jinjit:
This is just gorgeous Wil!
Sexy, cheeky, fun. Shows all about one hot august night.

I love the messy background against her pure-colored legs.
I like the pose and the parts of her you chose to display, and those wonderful light & shadow games all over her... umm... butt :-)

If I would change anything here, would only be the alignment of the composition.
I think a diagonal look on her would make this more dynamic. (by the way, that would also stand more with the fact that you were drunk ;-)
You should give it a try sometimes.

groovin'
by messerschmitt

Comment by hideout:
"Live Music" aside, this caught my eye - the drummer's beard and sideburns don't appear in his reflection in the mirror? Nice shot for an indoor pic.

Hot August Night
by messerschmitt

Comment by Goldwing_ed:
Considering the fact that you had a extreme hangover, and that you had other things on your mind ;), this is a great shot!

Best regards,
Ed

Hot August Night
by messerschmitt

Comment by BeeGee:
Less pattern on the underground/bed linens (e.g. just one color plus interesting lighting, thus ripples and shadows) and a lighter (or no) top might help this to become even better.

Plus the twist in the hip looks sort of unnatural, definitely not relaxed.

Either show more hair and arms (maybe even all of her) or leave them out all together.

Just my 2 cents.
Bruno

groovin'
by messerschmitt

Comment by rlinn3:
Just feels to tightly cropped to me. Maybe try focusing on one musician? 5

groovin'
by messerschmitt

Comment by Azrifel:
Amsterdam?
I like the mood/ambiance of this photo

groovin'
by messerschmitt

Comment by Suki:
Tones add a nice nostalgic feel.
I think a shallow DOF could help avoid the busy feeling. (7)